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Dead Shuffle

Published: Mar 25, 2012

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Description

Dead Shuffle Jade Imma gonna use in my 8th grade graduation project! It looks really incomplete though but it should be believable that it's actually done :V

Jade Harley (c) Andrew Hussie

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2700x3979px 6.48 MB

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Jinxletandcake

Mar 27, 2012

_{The lips and nose are a little lopsided. Mostly the lips. Also, the arms are a little too thick for the body. Not it terms as it's not skinny enough, but the ratio. Her knee-caps are very large for her legs. Just try not pronouncing them out too much. The right side of her boob is kinda lopsided as well. I also need to point out that the shading makes everything seem more thick. It looks as though her clothing is 3 inches thick or something. I get a kind of plastic-ey feeling from the clothes.

buuuut I really think this is a nicely composed drawing and the shading on the glasses is really nice : D

I'm sorry for my long critiqueee ;;;;___;;;; just shhhhh. I don't want to sound harsh either and i understand that you needed to finish it for your 8th grade project.}